"With
My Grandfather"
by Zelda and "The
Death of My Father"
by Yehuda Amichai are two poems whose main topic is
the loss of a loved one. Both poems contain expressions
that question faith in God as a result of loss and death.
Both poems deal with the individual and not the Jewish
nation and Zionism - the collective whole which the
writers before the modern period talked about.
However, both poems
are built differently: In the original version of "The
Death of My Father" (in Hebrew) there are rhymes
which make it a bit lighter to read. The contrast of the
serious topic, death, with the light style of writing
creates an ironic atmosphere. "With My
Grandfather" uses a much more lyrical, sentimental
tone, speaking of God in a serious way; showing a deep
belief in God.
In the poem "The
Death of My Father", God is presented in a mocking
tone and shown as a human being who "has hung His coat
on the hook of the moon". This image sounds as if it
is seen through the eyes of a child. On the other hand,
in the poem "With My Grandfather", the
grandfather's belief in God is strong and remains with
him in spite of his hard life: "outside they roared:
there is no justice, no judge. And in the shambles of his
room, angels sang of the Heavenly Jerusalem". Even
though the reality outside is frozen and everyone outside
is crying out not to believe, Zelda's grandfather
continues to believe and long for the Messiah.
Yehuda Amichai's poem
talks about death, how Amichai relates to his father's
death and what it symbolizes to him. In contrast, Zelda's
poem describes life, how in spite of death and violence
one continues to believe and look forward to the
continuation of life.
Chen &
Naomi